The Royal Lotus City

066

Try to adjust the volume. Some sections were too quiet, while others were too loud. While you’re speaking at a slower pace, it’s important to work on making each word as clear as possible. Try to focus on fully articulating each sound, especially the endings of words.

112

Facial expressions are very important. Add more warmth and enthusiasm to your face; don’t just rely on words. Eye contact with the camera should feel like you’re connecting with your audience directly, so try to make it more intentional.

167

Add more confident and deliberate gestures to make your delivery appear more engaging. Work on projecting your voice more because some parts were hard to hear.

365

You did a good job with text 1, 2, and 3, but your energy dropped a little at text 4. It’s important to keep the same level of enthusiasm throughout. If you’re transitioning to a new location or setting, make sure your vocal tone and facial expressions adjust accordingly. 

475

Bring more personality and energy to your presentations to engage the audience. Your posture is good, but stiffness can make you seem nervous. Practice body awareness exercises to relax and appear more comfortable.

497

The video submitted contains only one text, whereas the requirement was to present four sentences. Your delivery is clear, but the way you break up the words and the tone of your voice do not align with the intended emotion of each sentence. Make sure your tone matches the mood of each sentence.

534

For text 4, work on making your eye contact with the audience feel more genuine. It will increase their engagement and make you appear more confident.

541

Be mindful of where to pause, as some breaks feel unnatural. Also, try to make your body language and facial expression more dynamic to match the tone of your voice.

709

While you’re trying to vary your tone, it’s still a bit too monotone. Try adjusting your pitch to reflect the emotion of each sentence. Use more expressive gestures and facial expressions to make your delivery feel more lively and engaging. Text 4 was too fast.

754

You didn’t use any visual aids, which is fine, but incorporating some might make your message clearer. Try to make your delivery warmer and more welcoming. Don’t just present the information, but make the audience feel involved.

778

Your pauses could be more natural to improve the flow of your delivery. Try to speak more freely instead of reading. Also, relax your hand gestures and make your facial expression more fluid. 

790

You didn’t use any visual aids, which is fine, but incorporating some might make your message clearer. Make your gestures more purposeful and keep your tone steadier to help your presentation be more engaging. Try using more varied facial expressions to convey the emotions of your presentation. 

815

There’s potential in your delivery; just try to avoid swaying from side to side. When you read the sentences, the flow feels unnatural. Adjust the pauses and rhythm to make it sound more like speaking rather than just reading. 

859

Great use of space and movement. Keep up the effort to remain natural and relaxed, as it enhances your overall presentation.

860

Too many pauses within sentences can break the flow of your presentation, making it harder for the audience to follow. Try to find a balance in your pacing to keep the sentences connected. 

873

Great warm expression and natural intonation. To improve clarity, try focusing on enunciating each word more distinctly. 

895

Your tone is great, but try to match it with more facial expressions to make your presentation more engaging.

930

To make it more engaging, try varying your pitch and speed. It’ll help make your delivery feel more natural and conversational. Also, pay attention to your facial expression to appear more welcoming and connect with your audience. 

947

Neat attire and clear pronunciation really stood out. Great job!

956

Good job on keeping your presentation clear. To enhance it further, try to emphasize key points to make it more dynamic.

967

Try to relax your shoulders and avoid stiff movements. Practice speaking without looking at your notes for long periods—this will help you seem more confident and engaging. Make sure your gestures match the key points you’re trying to emphasize. Use your facial expressions and tone to draw the audience in and make them feel like they’re part of the conversation.